Review Request for my Game

Teaching Reviews requests
1

Hey there, I started playing a couple of weeks ago and switched now on the 19x19 Board.

I need some advice what I have done wrong, what I have done really wrong and what I can do better

Thanks

Link: https://online-go.com/game/4038560

2

I made a few comments. https://online-go.com/review/109316

3

Thanks a lot