Review my game please ( 19x19 13k vs 11k )

Would love to get this reviewed, I played real bad though and I’m white.

EDIT ^^ It’s not this one, see below.

ongoing game

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Oh that is the wrong game sorry, that is just a game against my daughter who is interested in GO. Nothing to review there, sorry it’s this one.

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There are some technical issues with the fight on the top. I’m sure someone else will say something about this. But the main problem starts with your move 16 at D13.

Look at the whole board. Most of your stones are already in the area around D13.
Black is mapping out a huge area on the right and lower part and with his next move at Tengen also expanding it to the middle. Nothing changed with this picture till the end of the game.
You invaded the lower right corner and established a small group there. But that’s all.

Instead of D13 you should have tried to reduce the black framework.

I used to be quite good at stuff like that. Back when KGS actually was active I reached 8-7k and nudged 6-5k but I am so bad right now and make a lot of mistakes and weird moves. I know something went wrong on the top but can not really remember what ( I am not looking at the game right now ).

reducing framework is hard
its more easy to prevent creation of huge stronghold
to be everywhere, to invade everything before its too late

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You reduced your liberties with R16 on. You can not live with your group, so you have to take the black stones of the board. Better to make shure right away. If you play K18 instead of R16 everything locally is fine. If Black plays J18, you pull out your stone with K19. Black can not play atari from either side after that.