Review Request: ~7 kyu VS ~7 kyu (review already created by me, you add variations?)

So, I’m trying something new (for myself). I’ve commented and created variations for my own game here (I am WHITE, result: W + Res):

Anyone want to add variations? Thoughts? It seems that OGS does not let non-owners (of the review) to comment, but perhaps you can leave comments some other way (naming a variation with your comment?). Making my own review and commenting like this is experimental for me, not sure if this will work for others to review as well. It will also let reviewers know the purpose and thoughts behind some of the moves. My intention is to comment on the reviewers variation and remarks as well (to create a continuous, living review). Thanks,