Review requested
Pre note: The first letter (b or w) refers to move from black/white. Also I’m a SDK so some things I say/write may not be fully accurate.
After 24 wD2 I’d still consider the local hot (since shoulder hit + you can cut the 2 white groups if you move there) so would play E2.
I couldnt myself like 27 bD13, feels like white should have the advantage at the fight there?
After 32.wC11, I’d play bD16. It connects your stones, and now if white lets, bC17 looks to me taking the corner, and if white defends the corner you can cut off white’s left group access to center and enjoy the left side influence.
Top left corner could be played better tactically I believe, won’t analyse every move there (the shape isn’t the easiest for me as a SDK)
57 bA10 is just bad, after simple bB9 that white group looks dead, and even if it would be alive B9 is still a good move to prevent white groups to connect and force white to find correct moves to live in a restricted area.
63. bB8 would be better, the single white stone cannot escape, you restrict white group to that area and it’s white that needs to find how to live there.
In contrast, after 63 bD9 64 wB8, you have no issue with connecting your left side stones and white also seems to be living, so I’d just tenuki/play elsewhere since spending a move there doesnt really worth. And if I decided to play there, it wouldnt be for saving a single stone with bC9 but to cut 2 white groups with bB7-wC9-bC7, but many places on the board seems much more interesting to play than fighting over a single stone that doesnt affect life or death of big groups.
I think at 67 I’d try bH16 trying to force wH17 to follow up with bG14? that seems like best way to utilise the influence to me, with the exception white may not play wH17.
bJ14 isnt bad either, but after white G14, bH12 seems to me the correct way to build a wall and gain points at the right upper center. bG12 allows wH13 which there isnt an easy way to build a wall (after wH13, bJ12 wJ13 bK13 wH12 bH11 leaves too many cutting points and shouldn’t be good.)
Move 81, (last few moves were good imo) I’d start building a wall at lower center, around 7th-8th line. Going over the single weak stone isn’t a good plan, it gives you basically nothing when wasting time.
Move 85 my first instinct was cross cut with N18, and apparently it is good. Hard to directly explain, but with your stones being nearby it is harder for N19 to live than your N18, especially with wN19 wont be able to connect anywhere at north and east
Move 89, just bM11 would be good (bM11 wN11 bO10 wM12 bL11 is clearly good for black).
(The fight from move 104 onwards were so weird that… I dont know what would be good or how to comment on that, sorry about it. And I think the way you handled right upper corner invasion was good.)
Move 159 bF7 seems to me connect everything, and white invasion should be dead long term.
Move 171 the correct way to handle wT3 locally is bS4 (if white pushes wT4 now bT5 wT2 bS5 defends well). (The reason I said “locally” is apparently the area around E3 is more urgent and a move like bD3 is necessary, but I’d miss it in a game probably and it’s hard to see imo)
Move 185, bF18 apparently kills. it’s hard to see it kills, but even if it wouldn’t, it would be still a really good move, since you threat E17 and when white defends it you can just connect it to your other stone and destroy any territory white would have on the upper side.
Move 200 it’s hard to see for me which move would be best but that 1 point gote move definitely isn’t. G1, F5, F14 all seems better alternatives.
Really end: you need to close the gaps for correct scoring, it also allows you to gain a few points at the end if you play better than your opponent. (P12, J15, A14, G1 )
Saw too late, that uzaya wrote something. I started a review (papab vs. dufu).
At move 105 I’m a bit out of time. If you want to know about other parts of the game feel free to ask.
In general I like when the person asking for a review did at least a small one themself. It helps to get the person to do better reviews later on themself and helps identify misconseptions. And formulating questions for a review is good thing.
Well I saw the part of it but the way you review seemed better than mine anyways lol.
thx, i’ll digest this later when i have more time